12 Overused Clichés to Avoid in Your Fantasy Novel

Updated on December 20, 2018
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Poppy has been an avid reader her whole life and is a fan of all things fantasy-related.

When done right, a fantasy story can stick with you for a lifetime. Due to the diversity and different sub-genres of fantasy, it is a highly popular genre that can be enjoyed by both children and adults across a range of entertainment, such as movies, video games, and, of course, books.

The most obvious books to come to mind when fantasy is mentioned include The Lord of the Rings, Harry Potter, The Chronicles of Narnia, and Game of Thrones. There are no limits in the fantasy genre and that is why it continues to be a popular choice for readers and writers today.

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Fantasy writers love to dip into a world of endless possibilities, but unfortunately, a brilliant idea you may believe is original and exciting might end up being one of the most eye-rolling cliches out there. These are extremely easy to miss by yourself, and might require a kindhearted (and honest) beta reader or editor to point out.

When I was 17, I wrote a fantasy trilogy that, at the time, I thought was awesome and original. Yet I later realized that it was riddled with stereotypes, clichés, and painful predictability!

Top 12 Clichés to Avoid in Fantasy Novels

So, what are some overused fantasy clichés that'll have people sighing and putting down your book, never to be opened again? Here are some of them.

  1. The Orphan
  2. The Prophecy
  3. The Special Powers
  4. The Dark Lord
  5. The Magical Artifact That Can Also Destroy or Save the World
  6. The Sassy Female Who Isn't Like Other Girls
  7. The Gentle Giant
  8. The Medieval Europe
  9. The Training
  10. The Wise Old Mentor
  11. The Surprise Royal
  12. The Chosen One

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This article isn't saying you should avoid these tropes completely because even the most exhausted of clichés can be great if used well. But if you're looking for stereotypes to avoid using by accident, read on.

1. The Orphan

The main character's parents tragically dying in an accident/in war/murdered by the antagonist is an exhausted cliché that appears in just about every YA novel these days, and not only in fantasy. While the prospect of having no living relatives is sympathetic, it is a trope that has almost become the norm.

We can have a brave hero or heroine with a close relationship with their father, an annoying sister, or an overprotective mother! Give the "orphan" trope a rest, already.

2. The Prophecy

The Prophecy is when the story foretells the protagonist's actions, usually as a hero who rises up to vanquish evil. It seems to be the go-to for fantasy writers to have some sort of religious or magical prediction that all comes together during the story.

Some readers actually say they hate this trope because it tells you what's going to happen before it has unfolded. Avoid a prophecy in your story if you can, it's been done many times.

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3. The Special Powers

"Main character is just a normal boy/girl until they discover they have special powers which makes them different and unique," usually after a traumatic event or when they come of age. Really, again? Why can't a character be average and normal, yet rise to the challenge and overcome personal flaws instead of jumping in with their super magical abilities?

Powers are cool, but being gifted and unique can only be charming for a certain amount of time before their ability to effortlessly kick everyone's butt gets tiresome.

4. The Dark Lord

Why are there so many antagonists, usually one tough guy, who is just evil with no real motive or reason? No one wants to rule the universe just "because," and yet we see it manifesting all the time: some unspoken, soulless baddie who lives to torture and maim and kill for no reason other than that "they're evil."

Bad guys are so much more interesting when they have a motive other than becoming overlord of the world, and perhaps a reason or two that they turned out like that.

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5. The Magical Artifact That Can Destroy or Save the World

The sword of legends! The amulet of gods! The tome of treasures! There always seems to be one lost, legendary item that would control epic allies, destroy the universe or, more often than not, vanquish evil from the world. We've seen this trope in all kinds of fantasy stories and, unless done in an unusual or original way, is terribly overused.

It's even more tiresome when the main character can track down this special item fairly easily where armies and adventurers over centuries have failed!

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6. The Sassy Female Who Isn't Like Other Girls

Everyone loves a strong heroine. Tris (Divergent), Katnis (The Hunger Games), and Yeine (The Hundred Thousand Kingdoms) are just a few examples. Unfortunately, though, what would have been different and sassy twenty years ago has now been used so much that it has become even more of a stereotype than the simpering damsel in distress of the early Disney days.

Some overused female character clichés include:

  • Hating makeup and all things girly. A strong female doesn't always have to be a tomboy. Her disdain of "girly" women just makes her seem catty.
  • Hating men. A "don't need no man" kind of attitude can be charming at first, but a character who turns up her nose at half the population because of their gender doesn't sit well with most folks.
  • Breathtakingly beautiful but doesn't know it. Writers often write about characters who they wish they were, and it can be tempting to be an aesthetically perfect female character, but of course, has no idea her thick locks and epic jawline make those around her swoon. Your character can have physical flaws. Jacqueline Wilson does this a lot with her stories about young girls, and it sticks with you and makes a character way more relatable.
  • Kicking everyone's ass all the time. Your girl doesn't have to be the best at everything. This can be everything from sword fighting to video games - your character can be strong without being perfect.
  • Is really bad with children. I've seen this time and time again in stories and movies. Children seem to be condemned as something cool girls don't like, which isn't true at all. Your character doesn't have to have overpowering maternal instincts, but leave the "eww, kids" attitude on the back burner.
  • Extremely rude and mean. A bad attitude doesn't equal strength. A strong character is empathetic and kind as well as fearless. A character who berates people for being upset or refuses to help the weak can be potentially unlikable and damage your story.
  • Absolutely perfect with no flaws. This is a manifestation of a drop-dead gorgeous girl who is top of her class in everything and never loses a battle or an argument. Cool, but utterly unrelatable and unrealistic. We can't identify with someone who has never failed or had a bad day.

Your character needs to have flaws, fears, and self-doubt from time to time. Harry Potter had an awful temper. Frodo was almost possessed by the ring. Tris had mixed feelings about the things she needed to do. Let these inspire your heroine.

7. The Gentle Giant

It seems that everyone, at the same time, thought to themselves, "You know what's charming and original? A huge beefy guy who isn't huge and beefy on the inside, but a real softie!"

While some concepts of having looks that clash with personality are original, the Gentle Giant is not. TVTropes gives more detail on why this has become a stereotype.

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8. The Medieval Europe

Fantasy is an awesome genre, but medieval Europe-esque worlds with harsh winters and rolling hills have become the go-to for fantasy novels (and video games as well; just look at Skyrim, The Witcher, and Dragon Age). Some have even started to call it a "stock" world.

When I wrote my fantasy trilogy at 17, I believed I was basing the world on Scotland, my home country. Then when a reader said that it was boring and unoriginal, I realized that he was right. Mountains, rivers, and forests are romantic as heck, but your world needs something special that separates it from the rest if it's going to stick out.

9. The Training

Not only in fantasy, but in many YA books, there is a period of "training." This could be from the mentor or group of friends in a sword fighting arena or a magical academy. I appreciate this is sometimes needed to develop the character's skills, but it could be done over a period of time throughout the story, not just "six months later and she was the best in the class."

10. The Wise Old Mentor

Another story trope that has bombarded fantasy novels since The Lord of the Rings is a mentor, usually elderly and incomparably wise, who often has the key to whatever the hero needs to make the next step in his journey. In fantasy, this is often portrayed in the form of a wizard or the grizzled veteran, like in Eragon.

Having a mentor or teacher is fine, but it doesn't always have to be portrayed as an old and wise wizard or war veteran. There is a lot you can do with a character like this, and it's easy to unintentionally fall into stereotypes.

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11. The Surprise Royal

A twist that the main character or one of their friends is secretly the heir to a powerful throne has eyes rolling year after year. Although in its essence a fun concept to explore, it can become predictable very easily.

If you need to have a surprise prince or princess, make it someone who would be impossible to guess! The trick to having successful (i.e. not glaringly obvious) plot twists is baiting - making the reader guess that it's someone else. If the main character is a royal, then have them find out sooner, not as a surprise reveal at the end.

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12. The Chosen One

A hero should be a hero because he wants to be, not because it's written in stone. A shocking plot twist where a strange artifact or moment of clarification deems our main character as the "Chosen One" has been so overused that it is almost stapled to fantasy now. It's not needed!

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Writing a book is challenging, and it can be even more difficult to try to avoid overused stereotypes in any kind of fiction! Whether your fantasy novel contains none of these clichés or all of them, what matters most is that it is written well. Hopefully, this guide can help you spot any potentially predictable plots or overdone character types.

© 2018 Poppy

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    • poppyr profile imageAUTHOR

      Poppy 

      4 weeks ago from Tokyo, Japan

      Thank you, Penny!

    • poppyr profile imageAUTHOR

      Poppy 

      4 weeks ago from Tokyo, Japan

      Hi! Thank you for commenting. You simply need to have explosive storylines and action from page one. I completely understand the "wait for it, it gets better" mentality, but unfortunately people won't read books these days unless they grab them from the very first paragraph.

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      Arthur Salomoncyk 

      4 weeks ago

      Great article. I constantly attempt to always go the opposite direction from expectations within the confines of a solid storyline. In other words, not simply for effect but as somewhat of a misdirection from where the story plans to go.

      That said, I've really been struggling with my latest story. I lay out just about every trope there is, right up to the point of nonsensical motivations. I worry it may alienate potential readers who could truly appreciate the originality of my characters that seem, on the surface, to be everything they've seen before.

      To make matters worse, my revelation arc doesn't even engage until about 30 chapters in. I'm sitting on an egg with contents that truly have never been seen before but I just don't think I can convince the reader to travel with us to find out what's in it. Additionally, there's just no whiff of an egg, just a formulaic travel fantasy with an almost absurd end-goal.

      Thankfully, the goal is never reached as the story explodes open just prior to destination. All my characters have deep, believable motivations yet will absolutely come across as paper thin; indeed, it's actually required by the story for them to be paper thin throughout.

      Am I going to lose my thoughtful readers? They won't be interested in a trip to the fireworks factory and the type of reader that would enjoy that tale are going to certainly be confused as to why the book doesn't end at the fireworks factory.

      How can I play tropes to dupe my reader without losing them as they dismiss my opening salvo as a trope?

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      Penny Leigh Sebring 

      4 weeks ago from Fort Collins

      Creative ideas can easily become boring when they are overused. Thanks for the run-down!

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      Poppy 

      4 months ago from Tokyo, Japan

      You’re welcome, Bushra! Thank you so much for commenting.

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      Bushra Ibrahim 

      4 months ago from Decatur

      This article was great, I love reading things when people point out the flaws in mainstream writing. Admittedly, I have done this a couple times, but I am on the path of fixing them so hopefully, they can be avoided. Thank you for writing this!

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      Poppy 

      5 months ago from Tokyo, Japan

      Oh dear! I'm sure it's still good though :) Thank you for commenting.

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      Marsha Blevins 

      5 months ago from WV

      Ah! Dang it! --raises a guilty hand-- Yep, I've done a few of these. Nice list, Poppy! Thanks for the insight.

    • poppyr profile imageAUTHOR

      Poppy 

      5 months ago from Tokyo, Japan

      Haha it’s okay, I’ve used a lot of them too. You know your books aren’t cliche at all!

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      JMD Reid 

      5 months ago

      NOOOOOO!!!!!!! I used some of these. Nice article, Poppy!

    • poppyr profile imageAUTHOR

      Poppy 

      5 months ago from Tokyo, Japan

      Thank you! I also read a lot and definitely come across narrowing eyes often. The same with biting lips, furrowing eyebrows, and burning cheeks!

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      Poppy 

      5 months ago from Tokyo, Japan

      Intriguing! I wish you all the luck in the world with it.

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      Poppy 

      5 months ago from Tokyo, Japan

      Thanks Liz. You might notice these cliches in YA novels in particular.

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      Doris James MizBejabbers 

      5 months ago from Beautiful South

      I'm not a fantasy writer, but I'm an avid fantasy reader, so I looked for your points in some of the books I've read in the last couple of years. I take advantage of Kindle Lending Library books (read one free book per month). In that group, the Chosen seems to always be the hero. I hadn't thought about it before, but it does get old.

      Poppy, you know something else that gets old? (I may be giving you a topic for another article on writing.) It's the old cliche: His eyes narrowed. Her eyes narrowed. The dog's eyes narrowed. Everybody's eyes narrowed to express anger or anything but joy. This appears in every genre, especially romance books that I normally don't read unless I'm desperate. So puleeze, fellow writers, avoid this old cliche. I've almost put books down that overuse it.

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      Mamerto Adan 

      5 months ago from Cabuyao

      Thanks! About a boy who sees strange markings on his skin after a lightning strike. It's up to him to decode what the markings mean.

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      Liz Westwood 

      5 months ago from UK

      This a thoughtfully written guide. It makes me more aware of the cliches out there.

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      Poppy 

      5 months ago from Tokyo, Japan

      Very cool, Mamerto! What’s it about?

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      Mamerto Adan 

      5 months ago from Cabuyao

      I'm actually working on a fantasy novel right now. Thanks for sharing this!

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